A moment in time at the swimming pool.
WALT: Use punctuation correctly and write in first person.
When I got out of the one car trip to Hamner Springs I was so excited . At Hamner Springs the pools are outside. I went in the lazy river the right way. I got out the lazy river it was cold. Then I went on the hydro slide. It was very fun!
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